Another
by Phil on Mon Sep 27, 2004 4:20 am
Another summer gone
Another winter coming
Another mistake made
Another chance wasted
Another day passed
Another night falling
Another hope dies
Another dream fades
Another rain falls
Another face cries
Another love ends
Another heart stops
Another winter coming
Another mistake made
Another chance wasted
Another day passed
Another night falling
Another hope dies
Another dream fades
Another rain falls
Another face cries
Another love ends
Another heart stops
Comments
Posted by Nocturne on Wed Jan 26, 2005 2:27 pm
I usually don't like this kind of repetitive poetry but I like this one. I read it and I just thought "Exactly". I'm wondering though, if perhaps you should have left out the last couplet? Just a suggestion. :)