last entry for helm at her knees - PoetsQuill Message Board

teetree
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such is circumstances and the carrying
of the decision
not difficult
it further finally
NO LONGER POSSIBILITY OF DOUBT
one remains at ones post in order
the second placed holds firmly persevering not to submit
to the inferior man dressed in womens clothing
ruled by he/she self
her lines on her face fade to balding black
blinded by the lighting rods
her choice chico
her choice

her eyes disappear

no remorse for the vacante face
the sloping down of her cheeks finds what she willed for
in the first place

emptyness
in a hollow dark principle

you get what you asked for

MERRY MERRY X..............to you

no grace

Posted: Sat Dec 25, 2004 4:53 am

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Ben Grader

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Joined: Sun Oct 24, 2004 11:24 am

In principle I am determined to criticise a post for each poem which I myself submit. It seems to me that although people on this site are willing to read others work they will not for some reason or other post comments.
'Emptyness' and 'hollow darkness' are all I can find here.
I only wish that Engprof from a former excellent site of which I was a member could read this - it would turn him apoplectic I am sure.
He was a character that I and Cyncity - from the first PQ - nicknamed Egoprof. He was even though a very good teacher.

Born and bred a country yokel

Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2005 6:02 pm

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