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Posted by teetree on Sat Dec 25, 2004 4:53 am
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such is circumstances and the carrying
<br>of the decision
<br>not difficult
<br>it further finally
<br>NO LONGER POSSIBILITY OF DOUBT
<br>one remains at ones post in order
<br>the second placed holds firmly persevering not to submit
<br>to the inferior man dressed in womens clothing
<br>ruled by he/she self
<br>her lines on her face fade to balding black
<br>blinded by the lighting rods
<br>her choice chico
<br>her choice
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<br>her eyes disappear
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<br>no remorse for the vacante face
<br>the sloping down of her cheeks finds what she willed for
<br>in the first place
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<br>emptyness
<br>in a hollow dark principle
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<br>you get what you asked for
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<br>MERRY MERRY X..............to you
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<br>no grace
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Posted by Ben Grader on Thu Jan 20, 2005 6:02 pm
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In principle I am determined to criticise a post for each poem which I myself submit. It seems to me that although people on this site are willing to read others work they will not for some reason or other post comments.
<br>'Emptyness' and 'hollow darkness' are all I can find here.
<br>I only wish that Engprof from a former excellent site of which I was a member could read this - it would turn him apoplectic I am sure.
<br>He was a character that I and Cyncity - from the first PQ - nicknamed Egoprof. He was even though a very good teacher.
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