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Posted by teetree on Thu Dec 23, 2004 8:53 am
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the idling offspring
<br>remains an open passager
<br>erased ten thousand lotus seeds
<br>holding less for fear
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Posted by Ben Grader on Thu Jan 20, 2005 10:51 am
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I am sorry but for me - my fear is as to whether it is me or this poem which is chaotic.
<br>Lines do not link up and it makes me wonder if this is some form of mickey taking?
<br>Sorry again but this idling passager has erased this from his mind.
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Posted by Phil on Fri Jan 21, 2005 8:51 am
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I'm not quite sure of what meaning (if any) there is to be gotten from this poem, but I like it for reasons I can't really explain. Then again, there's a lot of time that <i>I</i> don't make sense, so that might have something to do with it.
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