Raged Suicide
by Josienthepussycats on Sun Oct 30, 2005 6:33 pm
My throat so sore
My eyes so red
But it's not over
Holes in the wall
Stuffed animals and pillows shredded
But that's only the beginning
Music blaring
Glass shattering
But it's only getting better
Dressers knocked over
And clothes all over the floor
But it's only getting easier
Cds broken
And paper torn
But it's only getting funnier
Broken scissors
And bloody wrists
But the fun has only begun
Loaded gun
Cocked and ready
But it's only getting louder
Trigger pulled
Blood and body on the floor
But that's only the start.
My eyes so red
But it's not over
Holes in the wall
Stuffed animals and pillows shredded
But that's only the beginning
Music blaring
Glass shattering
But it's only getting better
Dressers knocked over
And clothes all over the floor
But it's only getting easier
Cds broken
And paper torn
But it's only getting funnier
Broken scissors
And bloody wrists
But the fun has only begun
Loaded gun
Cocked and ready
But it's only getting louder
Trigger pulled
Blood and body on the floor
But that's only the start.
Comments
Posted by shadowslight18 on Fri Nov 18, 2005 11:56 pm
omg,i love that poem!
Posted by Buetros444 on Sat Nov 19, 2005 2:46 am
Hey Josie, I'm glad you liked Valentine's Over Palestine. I did type up some other stuff, hopefully they'll post it. Anyway, I really enjoyed Raged Suicide. The flow was nice; I could almost see it as a song. Keep up the good work.
Posted by Buetros444 on Sat Nov 19, 2005 2:46 am
Hey Josie, I'm glad you liked Valentine's Over Palestine. I did type up some other stuff, hopefully they'll post it. Anyway, I really enjoyed Raged Suicide. The flow was nice; I could almost see it as a song. Keep up the good work.