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Poetichick
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Hear the drumbeat,
Hear the song,
Feel the heartbeat,
Beating strong.
Fight for freedom,
Fight for the land,
Fight for the families,
All that you have.
Feel the beat,
Feel the song,
Within the heartbeat
It shall live on.

Feel the fire,
Its warmth, its glow,
Its light dances with the shadows below.
The yellow,
The red,
Intertwine and grow,
Grow until the sun gives birth
To the glorious morn.

Dawn,
The life,
The start,
The prayer,
The approach of a never ending fear.
A second heartbeat,
A second song,
One fear has brought upon.
Thunder rattles through
A clear blue sky,
Caused not by the welcome buffalo,
But by the clouded men who ride.
Women run with their children,
While the men,
Their husbands and sons
Fight for all that they love.
To live on in their way of life,
Or to be confined in terrible strife,
Dilemmas they face for they who come,
And bitterly face them in the brilliant high light.

Cries of the Braves,
Babes,
Women,
Blazing over the seemingly
Muffled battering of
Thundersticks,
And the clouded men.
Red and clear rivers now flow
Through the dusty lands
Where none had been before.

Hear the drumbeat,
Hear the song,
Feel the heartbeat once beating so strong.
They fought for freedom,
They fought for their land,
They fought for their families,
All that they had.

The brave warriors
Now laid flat on the ground,
Eyes fixated on the horizon.
These warriors
Brave,
Proud,
And strong,
Now letting the final fire dance alone.


I let no one see me cry, but the product of those tears are those poems that I share here.
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Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 1:21 am Report this post to a moderator
WolfEyes8528
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Awesome poem, kudos to you.
We few, we precious few, for he who sheds blood with me today, shall be my brother.
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Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2004 9:51 am Report this post to a moderator
Ben Grader

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Impressive, I liked the way you allowed the lines to build up in length, although I did find that to try and read it aloud it was a little unusual - after the second read through I began to find the rythymn fall into place.
Born and bred a country yokel
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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 10:26 pm Report this post to a moderator
Bluesy Socrateaser

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Far beyond any critical response is the tragic message of this story. One that no amount of reparation can ever change, nor can a single life ever be given back.
This should also be a reminder of conflicts that still exist for the sake of greed, occupation, and enslavement.

Change is you.
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